I'm opening myself up for criticism here, but...I don't think Sess is OOC in this. There is a difference between someone who has no emotions and someone who chooses not to display them to the world, and I've always felt Sesshomaru was the latter.
This piece is beautiful as it stands, so I'm honestly hoping you don't rewrite it. My favorite line was this:
Do as I say and I'll take it away. I promise.
Thanks to you, Tenseiga has a personality. I'll never look at the sword in the same light again.
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Date: 2005-06-20 02:22 pm (UTC)I'm opening myself up for criticism here, but...I don't think Sess is OOC in this. There is a difference between someone who has no emotions and someone who chooses not to display them to the world, and I've always felt Sesshomaru was the latter.
This piece is beautiful as it stands, so I'm honestly hoping you don't rewrite it. My favorite line was this:
Do as I say and I'll take it away. I promise.
Thanks to you, Tenseiga has a personality. I'll never look at the sword in the same light again.