I remain firmly convinced that it isn't wrong to love an odd pairing if it results in lurvely fics like this. So HA! to the NaKo haters. XDDD

The clay and marble theme is excellent; fitting for both Kohaku and Sango, respectively. I love the little comparisons Naraku makes in his head, pointing out Kohaku's failure to be just like his sister; it's something he'd do, to make note of everything that isn't perfect - even though he doesn't really care. =P

And the last line is deliciousness itself, simply because it seems so wildly untrue. There's that fabulous arrogance again. XD

The one thing that threw me off a little was the use of the word "compliant" in the second line of the ficlet. I'd just put "pliant" instead, since compliant is used more for describing the attitude of a person, and pliant is used for describing an easily manipulated material.

And that's all I've got. >.O No evil crit for you, m'dear, because I love your writing already. It has a very distinctive, sophisticated flow that makes reading incredibly easy. I loves. Thanks for offering us such a dark little delicacy. ^.^