OK, thanks for the advice! ^^ *goes to edit stuff* I know next to nothing about English punctuation, they didn't bother to tell us about it at school. *sigh*

About Naraku thinking of Sango... she IS peripheral for him, that's true, but maybe he could remember her because of her good looks? I dunno. But it's OK if you aren't convinced, it's just my weird thinking pattern... ^^;;

Again, thank you so much. ^_^