ext_350028 ([identity profile] airian-reesu.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] 30shards 2005-04-30 06:55 pm (UTC)

--happy sigh-- I love the way you write. Your style (here, at least) is terse and yet flowing. I love your dialogue. And how your convoluted sentences/phrases still happen to make sense. Parallels and comparison are nice, too. ^__^

The story is dark, which is good, and the overall concept is a good-kind-of interesting. I've found that I enjoy Sess/Kag in the future more than in the past...

And of course, I love your Sesshoumaru. ^__^

(Although, it is hard to read something like this with the TV blaring in the background...-_- I need to focus, damn it!)

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